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roina_arwen ([personal profile] roina_arwen) wrote2024-08-31 03:21 pm

LJ Idol: Week 7 Write-Off: "On Ambition"

Author's Note: This poem is written in the form of a Cento, which is "a poetic form composed entirely of lines from poems by other poets" used to create a new, unique poem. I cannot tell you how many poems I went through to do this, but it was at least triple the number of lines shown here. Each of the poets whose lines I have used have been given credit (in order) at the bottom. Enjoy!

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"On Ambition"

It must be due our hearts, our minds, our powers
Of wisdom, glory, truth, and light,
breaking free. I understand your astonishing
leapfrogging elephants
passing, again, the turnstiles of my life, its sharp
skin against the pure blue sky—
though the outdoors has rarely inspired me to write,
out of repetition comes variation.

Ambition is a dizzy height
of every girl or woman who tips her head up.
There are thousands to tell you it cannot be done,
and bleed for love until we faint.
Far below us, a stop-sign rose
as though created by someone skilled with a glue gun
and that started her always wanting
the encore, a raise, respect, results, whatever.

I’m not scared and I don’t care where the dream
learned of her secret special talent,
along her spine, splayed, in plaster
I feel my fate in what I cannot fear.
Call hallelujah, call amen, call deep thanks
like this obituary-filled Bible,
Enough for me the voice that cheers
someone else. Pretend I’m winning.




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Credits Go To:
Stanza one: Sterling Brown; Paul Laurence Dunbar; Tina Chang; Joshua Bennett; Perry Janes; Gary Jackson; David Berman; David Tomas Martinez.
Stanza two: Lucretia Maria Davidson; Luisa A. Igloria; Edgar Guest; Elsa Gidlow; Carol Muske-Dukes; Alexandria Peary; Victoria Chang; Claire McQuerry.
Stanza three: Erica Hunt; Gailmarie Pahmeier; Rosanna Warren; Theodore Roethke; Carl Sandburg; Tyree Daye; John Rollin Ridge; and Maggie Smith.
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[personal profile] bleodswean 2024-08-31 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
WOOT WOOT?!?!?!? This is utterly captivating, emotive, direct, symbolic, delightful, impressive perfection.
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[personal profile] swirlsofpurple 2024-09-01 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
These lines fit together so well, beautiful.
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[personal profile] static_abyss 2024-09-01 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I can imagine how many poems you had to go through to make this beautiful piece. I like the idea of other poets helping build your poem.
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[personal profile] alycewilson 2024-09-01 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I've written centos before, so I know how difficult it can be. You did an excellent job. My favorite is the last stanza.
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[personal profile] alycewilson 2024-09-01 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Leapfrogging elephants are fun!
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[personal profile] reidharriscooper 2024-09-02 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
Love how this came together and the impressive poets and lines used. Very nice work.
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[personal profile] xeena 2024-09-02 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
This is so clever and I too love the idea of other poets helping to build a poem, really well done!
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[personal profile] murielle 2024-09-02 08:39 am (UTC)(link)

What a feat! Yay, you!

I like that all the way through it empowers women. Yes! Way to go. <3
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[personal profile] fausts_dream 2024-09-03 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I have a literature degree I'm a member of a group called The Gulf Coast poets... Yet somehow I hadn't encountered this form yet.

So thanks for improving my knowledge base. You combined these in a fascinating way.
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[personal profile] adoptedwriter 2024-09-03 01:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! What a perfect blend! Obviously, you have ambition!
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[personal profile] inkstainedfingertips 2024-09-03 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I have never heard of this form of poetry before. Really creative and you did a wonderful job of creating something new and beautiful.
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[personal profile] flipflop_diva 2024-09-03 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. This seems like it must have taken so long to do — I can't even imagine all the poems you must have read! But it's very cool, and I love the way it turned out!
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[personal profile] muchtooarrogant 2024-09-03 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
This was so much fun, with great imagery throughout.

Dan